cool image. i like the last crop the most (with the hand all in) is there a way to put more of the thumb in there?)
i dont mind the centered text. if you prefer flush left though, i like the line breaks on the last spread the most. (because there's no widow and the width of the column is comfortable)
if you meant for the "first" to flush left with the "mama" you should pull it in to the right a bit. it looks optically off because of the thin serifs on the "m"
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cool image.
i like the last crop the most (with the hand all in) is there a way to put more of the thumb in there?)
i dont mind the centered text. if you prefer flush left though, i like the line breaks on the last spread the most. (because there's no widow and the width of the column is comfortable)
if you meant for the "first" to flush left with the "mama" you should pull it in to the right a bit. it looks optically off because of the thin serifs on the "m"
cool stuff.
k
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